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Holding on by the seat of the soul,
Watching with horror as the world unravels,
Revealing the true chaos behind watching eyes
As you plunge below the icy waves,
Gasping in shock as you slowly drown
To a chorus of applause and cheers.

Holding on by the strings of the heart
As each pounding beat resolves into silence,
As each shuddering drive fades with the moment,
Leaving all calm and still, the realm of hurt behind
As silent certainty creeps forward from the darkness
To engulf everything in twilight.

Holding on by the will of the mind
As it screams in panic, thrashing wildly
In order to overcome the force of oblivion
Pressing down with undeniable conviction,
Praying madly for that ray of hope
To escape the cold clutches of death.

But though you try so hard
To hold back from that gate
By the time you see the signs
It's already too late

Hell's maw yawns, of course you fear,
But just what can you do?
Your grip is slipping, your hand is shaking
The end is looming near...

But you're holding on
     Though the pain is great
You're holding on
     It's not too late,
You're holding on
     You're facing fate
And there's nothing you can do but
     Hold on.
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Author's Comments

Something a little different. Trying hard not to rhyme, and then gave up, in order to change up the rhythm at the end. Just a random thought, that gave birth to this. And I like the staccato beat at the end.

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:iconperceptiontwin:
it sounds like a song.
i love the ending.

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It is an anti-person electrifying device.
:iconphoenixfalconsbayne:
sanku ^^. my work appears to be a great place for me to write poetry. i have another one i'll finish today and upload tomorrow ^^.

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Are you certain that if I jumped off this cliff that you'd miss me? Cause I really wanna learn to fly. :floating:

Sometimes I feel like the :+fav: faerie... "And a :+fav: for you... and one for you..."
:iconphoenixfalconsbayne:
sanku ^^

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Are you certain that if I jumped off this cliff that you'd miss me? Cause I really wanna learn to fly. :floating:

Sometimes I feel like the :+fav: faerie... "And a :+fav: for you... and one for you..."
:iconundyingblaze:
you are most welcome
:iconmeredith-de-monstre:
love it! (this could totally go in the ballad catagory!)

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Ending a sentence with a preposition is something up with which I will not put.
- Winston Churchill
:iconphoenixfalconsbayne:
Thank you very much... I hadn't thought of putting it in that catagory... didn't seem like much of a ballad to me. But thanks for the comment!

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Are you certain that if I jumped off this cliff that you'd miss me? Cause I really wanna learn to fly. :floating:

Sometimes I feel like the :+fav: faerie... "And a :+fav: for you... and one for you..."

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